This is a good start, but in terms of writing a blog post, in my view, you 0xD35A..., should try to put an emphasis on providing your perspective on the matter. Sadly, the article lacks traces of you, which I think makes it less interesting to readers as it gives nothing to hold onto when reading.

Here an example of what I mean: https://app.t2.world/article/cm13qufk6123220621mctlubmq9e

Simon (the author) writes over at Substack: sceneswithsimon, and he loves urbanism, so for readers who know his posts, it's nice to connect with him on his idea of zoning and layer 2s.

Hi timdaub.eth, thank you so much for your valuable and to-the-point feedback. I completely agree with your suggestions and will do my best to improve and write better articles.