Some feedback for writing a full essay on this: > Online Community > Tribes I actually would like you to prove this statement for me when you make it. But in your cast, for example, you didn't and so that left me a bit unsatisfied. Re your title: "Community is all you need" Same as above, when I read the post, I'd want the intro to sell me on that idea, the main part to convince me of the idea, and the conclusion to summarize everything. @casslin, let me know if this type of feedback was helpful!
This is very helpful! I tried to write it as concise as possible due to long cast character limits. Now i know what's missing from reader's perspective, will expand on those a bit in my later writing! (this is part of the 1stdraft club so im writing on this topic for 4 weeks in a row, and hope to make it a complete essay in the end.)